Write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best?
Is there constructive criticism that would help this group? What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?
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A lot of what you said was very poetic and I give a plus to that. However perhaps that was a downside to as if I were more into racing, perhaps it would have been more to me.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know what the Bonneville salt flats was until you r presentation. You did a really good job of explaining it. I actually want to go out there one day and maybe compete.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the video that you had in your presentation, it tied in great to your topic and showed the feeling that people get from the experience you get there. You were very well prepared and seemed to cover everything possible. I have never really heard much about Bonneville, and found your research very informing, exceptt maybe have a little bit more about hte beginning of the place,like who first used it. Overall I liked this presentation the best of all the presetnations and it was a good one to end on!
ReplyDeleteI liked the presentation and hope to go there sometime during my life. I wish that you talked more about all of the different records.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a great presentaion to end with. Great job!, Ive personally never known what Bonneville was and learned a lot. It would be an amazing feeling to just fly down the salt flat.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job of connecting your presentation to the American Dream. I learned that Bonneville started out as a lake which was very interesting to learn considering what it looks like now. The best part of the presentation was the video which showed the landscape of Bonneville. I didnt see anything wrong with this presentation!
ReplyDeleteYou guys did a great job in presenting you information making it very entertaining to listen to. Also you did a good job connecting it to the American dream, the video at the end was awesome. The only thing I would've added is more pictures but other than that it was good.
ReplyDeleteIt was obvious you guys were really into your topic and that helped with keeping our interest. The video showed an actual person's experience and made it more emotional.
ReplyDeleteI didn’t know the Salt Flats were subject to ownership, but knowing that they’re going to be used for solely racing and speed records and no advertisements is probably the best without defacing the lands with advertisements.
ReplyDeleteOkay, your presentation seriously made me want to go there. And I don't even race. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great presentation! You did a great job presenting with information you either remembered or had notes on (no text slides!). I also enjoyed learning about the different uses for the Flats, the arts, movies, and of course racing. I have no suggestions for improvement. It was all around a perfect presentation.
ReplyDeleteVery nice job! I never knew the salt flats were a free place to be with no cost to race i think that's a great idea because some people put thousands into their cars and put thousands more into racing on the track. I feel like the amount of speeding tickets would be decreased in that area considering people have a place to go all out.
ReplyDeleteAwesome presentation, usually the people who present last are kindof a letdown, but this presentation was very cool. I think you were the only group that seemed to really care about the place you researched. I could tell you were really passionate about your topic, and it was fun to learn about it. I also think you were one of the only groups who used a truly good video. Most of the videos were presenting information that the presenters could have just said themselves, but your video was original and really added more emotion to your presentation. I'm not into cars or racing or art really at all, but your presentation made me want to visit Bonneville. You guys did a great job.
ReplyDeleteI really loved learning about Bonneville. Also, the clip you played was very awesome I could feel the excitement in my bones. Overall, your presentation was very good.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your presentation highlighted some of the artistic aspects of this local. I didn't realize there was any other draw than the motor sport aspects.
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