Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Essay Progress

     I'm still somewhat early in the construction of my paper.  I have gotten my thesis down and picked out all of my body paragraphs and know what I'm going to write about.  What is going well is expanding on my topics.  I usually struggle at fully explaining what I am talking about, but I feel like I'm doing well in this paper.  What I am struggling with is finding a good amount of research to use.  Some of the things I try and explain do not have a lot of official research to go along with it.  My thesis statement is how the advancements in technology changes the way a society acts.

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