Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Brandon's Essay Progress

I'm still in the developmental stage of my essay. I have a really good idea of what I'm going to do and talk about, I just have to get it all on paper. I'm almost done with my rough draft, this is just so I'm prepared for Mondays class. So far it has not been too bad and I hope to get it completely finished earlier than expected. The toughest challenge for me is condensing the material into the allotted number of pages for this essay. My topic has a lot of sub-topics that could also be used for various essays. All in all the essay has been going well so far.
Almost forgot, here is my thesis statement, it needs some work.
The debate for or against data recorders is a current ethical issue that deals with invasion of privacy against the argument of safety; they originated for safety purposes, evolved to benefit insurance companies and now help solve cases dealing with automotive accidents, how much further will they go?


  1. Good job Brandon to get us going here today on the Essay Progress reports. Keep working hard and see you Monday!

  2. Your thesis sounds very interesting and I am curious as to what you find.

  3. I would be curious to see what you find also. The ethical debate of this topic has lots of pros and cons.

  4. This is going to be an interesting paper! I cant wait to read your draft Monday!