Wednesday, April 10, 2013
I'm still somewhat early in the construction of my paper. I have gotten my thesis down and picked out all of my body paragraphs and know what I'm going to write about. What is going well is expanding on my topics. I usually struggle at fully explaining what I am talking about, but I feel like I'm doing well in this paper. What I am struggling with is finding a good amount of research to use. Some of the things I try and explain do not have a lot of official research to go along with it. My thesis statement is how the advancements in technology changes the way a society acts.