Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Essay Progress

I am still in the early stages of my paper as well.  I am focusing more on not just the idea of the Kronos Effect itself but in different businesses it happened too.  For example, any small or family owned business, I think, is part of it.  Does anyone think those could count?  My surveys are almost complete, the people I asked are not getting back to me as quickly as I'd have liked, but the paper is coming along slowly but surely.  I have found that incorporating quotes or information from my surveys so far has been difficult because they all sound too similar.  Other than that, I am doing well on it hopefully!

6 comments:

  1. I like how you are going to use examples to explain the Kronos Effect, and not just giving us the theory.

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  2. I have to agree with what Henry said, its nice to see that you are taking it to more of a personal level than just explaining what it is. I'm glad you mentioned the surveys, because that is one thing I still have to do for my essay, and in all honesty, I almost forgot! I love your topic and I think you will have a great paper. Do work! lol

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  3. Anything can be used to help create your research paper, in exception to plagiarism. Get work done, son.

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  4. I like your topic a lot and how you are making it to include surveys. Are you asking specific small business around Marion? Is that what you mean about "..people aren't getting back to me.."? If so, I really like the idea. I hope the people get back to you soon though. If not, you could probably go online and find stories/videos of people talking about what has happened to their businesses. :) Good luck on your paper!

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  6. And I agree with Zach, Plagarism (probably) shouldn't be used in the paper. haha

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