When coming up with my poem, I first decided who it would be about. After choosing my brother as the topic, I began to think of some fond memories. Then I made rhymes from the memories. I found it easy to write and did not have any challenges in it. I was happy with my final product because I felt that I had some good rhymes and structure.
I consider myself to be a decent writer. However, I think that there is room for improvement in some of my writings. I find it hard to write a long paper without adding a lot of fluff in it. I also find it hard to make my paper flow smoothly. Although I am negative towards some of my writing, I feel optimistic about the future. With the way that our technology is exponentially improving, I believe that it will be even better in the future. New technology helps with the idea of the American Dream by making it easier to support yourself as well as a family.
Here is my poem.
My Friend, My Brother
One of my greatest friends is my brother, Kevin.He elders me by an age of seven.
This poem here shall show why,
I truely believe he's a great guy.
When we were young, we would laugh and play
Inside and outside every day.
He would show me how to cook
and laugh when I couldn't follow the book.
He has muscle but also mind.
He is tough but also kind.
Although he is built like a bear,
He is my brother and he's always there.
He always tells me that I'm smart,
And I always take it to heart.
Today, he is an engineer
And so will I within a few years.
When he told me that he was engaged,
I was happy and not enraged.
Although I will not be the best man,
Beside him I will forever stand.
Kevin is my only brother
And I love him like no other.
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